Tuesday, July 19, 2005

Chup kyun khadi ho?

Tumhe to meri zaroorat bhi nahi, par mujhe tumhari aadat hai,
Kya meri gumraah dhadkano ko dhadakne ki ijaazat hai?

Shayad kuch faasle tay karke,
Raat ke andhere se darke,
Teri parchai se bhi mulakat na hogi,

Paani se nam aankhon me ab sookha dala hai,
Zindagi main din-ba-din tanhayi ka shor bad chala hai,
Par tumhari ek muskurahat bhi hoton se nahi takrayi,
Pyaar na sahi, kya meri yaad bhi nahi aayi?

Apna jadoo wapas le jaao, meri soch mujhe wapas kar do,
Bezubaan is jism mai phir nazm ki awaaz bhar do,
Yaad rakhne ki wajah ki jagah, bhoolne ki wajah bata do,
Meri berang subah se ye dhanak ka parda hata do,
Tab shayad sanson ko phir se chalne ke liye majboor kar sakoon.
Posted by First Rain at 12:36 pm

17 comments:

  1. That GirlTuesday, 19 July, 2005

    ok SOMETHING is up!!! am getting very "something is up" vibes!!!!
    *peers into Fr's face with a magnifying glass*

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  2. First RainTuesday, 19 July, 2005

    @grafx: Oooo... what are you looking for?

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  3. SoniaTuesday, 19 July, 2005

    ok! enuff is enuff. who is she??

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  4. That GirlTuesday, 19 July, 2005

    yeah..... tell us!!*runs off giggling*

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  5. First RainTuesday, 19 July, 2005

    @sonia: et tu? sigh!

    @grafx: yeah yeah... go ahead... giggle away.

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  6. MirageTuesday, 19 July, 2005

    That was sooo beautiful! Urdu I spose? Didnt understand a few words...but sounded so amazing!

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  7. SoniaTuesday, 19 July, 2005

    how else did u get to be such an expert?? throw me a rope here wudja?

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  8. First RainTuesday, 19 July, 2005

    @mirage: It is Hindi with a few Urdu words sprinkled here n there I suppose - so I guess it is still Hindi only :)

    @sonia: Expert... Who me? Whatever gave you that idea?

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  9. SoniaWednesday, 20 July, 2005

    expert at explaining the feelings a person goes through when in love, and afterwords. HOW do you do it?!!

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  10. cactusjumpWednesday, 20 July, 2005

    speechless!

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  11. Swathi Sambhani aka ChimeraWednesday, 20 July, 2005

    beautiful n enchanting verses to read first thing in the morning.
    must say u r no one beats u when it comes to poetry

    well my favorite verses

    "Paani se nam aankhon me ab sookha dala hai,
    Zindagi main din-ba-din tanhayi ka shor bad chala hai,
    Par tumhari ek muskurahat bhi hoton se nahi takrayi,
    Pyaar na sahi, kya meri yaad bhi nahi aayi?"

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  12. First RainWednesday, 20 July, 2005

    @sonia: How! I have no answer for that question. It's just there. :)

    @cactus: You lost your speech on reading this? :O Was it so shocking? :D

    @swathi: Thank you, thank you :) !

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  13. That GirlWednesday, 20 July, 2005

    flumps down on Fr's couch... am soooooooooo tired FR!!! do youhave any more chocolate?

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  14. First RainWednesday, 20 July, 2005

    @grafx: ehh... errr... emmm... chocolate.. U sure u don't want some coffee? :P Aww ok ok! Here's a bar of fruit n nut.

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  15. That GirlWednesday, 20 July, 2005

    YEAHHH BABYYYY thats what im talking about!!! JUST had coffee!!! am all hyper nowwwwww(&)Q($&)@($&@)(&$(_@$&_($*_(~~~!!!!

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  16. First RainWednesday, 20 July, 2005

    @grafx: Yesh yesh? Now ... what ;)

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  17. AnonymousWednesday, 23 November, 2005

    An beautiful transformation of feelings in to words........Keep it up..Only few have this guts.Its a wel composed nazm...good luck first rain - Shweta

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